Red Rose

heart of a beautiful flower my eclipse of love complete red rose in all your splendor beats love the most beautiful heart of hearts you are a crowning glory passion flows in each petal light catching you blush cobwebs of silver pearls the morning dew upon you in fragrance you smell heavenly with all those petals upon your crown the sun all but kisses you smiling down among'st the thorns you are a blushing red beauty scarlet in heart's love the sun smiles upon you enchantingly beautiful magical in sweet fragrance your aroma upon the air blushing red you wear the crown upon your heart you are the fairest mirror,mirror upon the wall you are the fairest in all the land soft my scarlet passion in beauty your heart bare queen of passion

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/9/2013 3:44:00 AM

Enchanted words throughout. It is a great pleasure to be introduced to your work. Something so simple as a flower holds so much beauty. I very much admire the rose in its softness, redness, and fragrance. The thorns give them a little twist too. It is no wonder they are the symbol of love and are the theme of quite a lot of poetry. You give the rose justice and I enjoyed reading. Always, Laura

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/13/2013 11:09:00 AM

MY HEART SWELLS IN THE BEAUTY OF THE COMMENT AMAZING DANCING WITH THE STARS BEAUTIFUL THANK YOU KINDLY APPRECIATED DEEPLY

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/8/2013 10:59:00 AM

The red rose is the rose of passion indeed.Outstanding personification..Sonehow the mirror made me think of snow white.You re a talented poet..Liam

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/8/2013 4:57:00 PM

all i will say is there is a few on this site pointed me here but fan story is by far the better site if you want to get published lots of people have loads of books published on it goodnight your an excellent writer soft and very beautiful to read

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/8/2013 2:22:00 PM

Published in magazines i mean...

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/8/2013 12:43:00 PM

I wish I could write in your site but i already struggle to make it here.My.girl is only one.yr old and i quitted my work till she goes to school.For these three yrs im dedicating as much as i can to her..Of course this site is the only place i kept writing in and trying to get publshed ..I recently started this.If i have extra time i try to restart studying..but tnks for asking.Im sure your poetry is loved there too.Who told you about ps if i might ask B-)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/8/2013 11:28:00 AM

RED IS MY FAVORITE COLOUR YOU WRITE VERY BEAUTIFUL ALSO IN FAN STORY PUT YOUR TALENT TO THE TEST TWO POEMS A DAY IS ALL IS REQUIRED I AM THE DARKHORSE IN THAT NETWORK I HAVE LOADS OF FANS I WOULD LOVE IF YOU JOINED BETWEEN US WE COULD TAKE IT BY STORM AS YOU ARE VERY TALENTED AND VERY SWEET

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/8/2013 11:22:00 AM

YOU HAVE ONLY READ A SMALL FRACTION OF WHAT I HAVE WRITTEN THE MIRROR IS THE SOUL ALIVE TO SEE A REFLECTION LIKE I SAW IN YOU BEAUTIFUL

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2013 3:21:00 PM

- A beautiful way to express love to! - Very beautifully written, your Red Rose !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/8/2013 7:06:00 AM

THANK YOU ANNE LISE AMAZING BEA\UTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED