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Red Rose

EYE'S SEE FLAWLESS GLAMOR SHINES BRIGHTLY MISSING POWER GLARES REFLECT PERFECT IMAGE WHILE BLINDING HOLD UNKNOWN DAMAGE MINDS PAUSE FORGETTING COVET CONVINCING ONE'S TRUE LOVE IT THE CLOSER IMAGE, STILL ONE GOAL DETERMINED- YOUR SHOT NOT TO BLOW THE ROSE YOU CARRY HAS ITS SMELL SLOWLY SEEING HOW FAR YOU FELL TRIPPED DOWN'S A BLINDING FIGHT PRESSING TIGHTER THINKING THE RIGHT ALL THE WHILE, YOUR BLEEDING ABUNDANTLY PAIN IS NUMB, HEART CRYING SILENTLY LOST GRIP, YOUR EYES ARE NOW CLEAR OVERWHELMED REALITY, A SUDDEN FEAR BLEEDING HEAVILY STILL, YOUR PALM IS BURNING SEEING SCARS, YOUR MIND IS BOGGLING YOU LOOK CLOSER TO DEAL- YOUR MISSION AND YOU NOTICE A PAINFUL STATION THE STORY ENDS ONCE YOU'RE ASHAMED EVERY ROSE HAS IT'S THORN, AND YOUR THORNS ARE TO BLAME

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/9/2009 11:39:00 AM
It is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic poetry Letty. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 5:55:00 AM
Interesting writing. Sara
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Date: 8/8/2009 11:48:00 PM
great last sentence! i could do without the capitalization though but I'm guessing your doing that to give it it's extra umph! which honestly if you read the words it selves don't need, very strong write you have, much enjoyed your poem n.n byt the way interesting last name! couldn't help to say
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