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The tribe she grew up in had troubles, they had tenacity too, thunder in the pulse of nurturing, lightning in traditional strengths, some called her a young arrow, sharp & carved well with feathers found in the ancient forest, others were jealous like rocks to rubies, squaw they said she was, she would strike back, sometimes against herself, cuts can feel meaningful whether from the mouth mother or from the blade of blame, Red Pony learned to stich her wounds, she taught the Chief to care again, the tribe would not starve, brothers and sisters would forgive from respect rather than from sympathy, Red Pony could travel to depths others found frightning, she had to find herself in the shadows before teaching by light, so young and so legendary, Red Pony taught the feilds to grow, she showed how love could be a force deserving bravery, I am Howling Wolf, she encouraged me to dance away from death, Red Pony and I made love out of suffering and mystery - J.A.B. %

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Date: 9/23/2015 6:39:00 PM
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Justin Bordner
Date: 9/23/2015 7:30:00 PM
She is the Spring of my heart...J.A.B.
Date: 7/18/2013 11:44:00 PM
I love your words...I read this twice....so much wisdom to absorb
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Justin Bordner
Date: 8/29/2013 3:17:00 PM
I love your reaction SuZ-D - thank you for the honor
Date: 5/5/2013 9:54:00 AM
This is absolutely amazing. Your story and descriptions so powerfull written. WOW WOW WOW
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Justin Bordner
Date: 8/29/2013 3:18:00 PM
I love the wow wow Karen - J.A.B. %
Date: 2/24/2013 3:51:00 AM
Hmm..I see you have done some study before and perhaps while writing this Justin, I think you have touched as well as you possibliy, could on the subject..Good to read and thank you for your considerate words..!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/24/2013 1:35:00 PM
Well Joe, honestly, I'm hoping for an extended course on this inspiration - J.A.B. %
Date: 2/12/2013 3:02:00 PM
Powerful write Justin. I love every line its stitched together perfectly.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/15/2013 1:04:00 PM
I thank you for your loyalty Jay - my talent would be mute if not for a soul like yours - J.A.B. %
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Jay Loveless
Date: 2/13/2013 8:48:00 PM
As Im sure she thanks you. Blessed be Howling Wolf, I bow to you and your ability to ceaslessly awe
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/13/2013 3:08:00 PM
Thanks Jay - the source of the power is in her story - I thank Red Pony, and Providence - J.A.B. %
Date: 2/11/2013 9:51:00 PM
Justin, wow... I can feel the burn, and the hold to grasp on.. One can teach, through the most troublesome time. Having many at the end of the palm, can mean survival to some. A great story, a sharp image, love the legend and story you painted through someones stitch and wounds.. one can learn lots through love making,, love the healing power... always~ LINDA
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/12/2013 12:34:00 PM
Thats awesome PD., thanks for giving your rich insight again - I'm sure the woman of this write would highly value your respect for her resilience, making sunshine from the rain - I do my best to remain open to being taught - J.A.B. %
Date: 2/10/2013 5:52:00 PM
Oooooh. Another enchanting one. Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review on my work. I look forward in reading this one again. Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/11/2013 1:01:00 PM
Thanks for helping our craft to survive Laura - J.A.B. %
Date: 2/10/2013 3:05:00 PM
Very beautiful
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/12/2013 11:43:00 AM
Beautiful is my objective Donna, thank you very much for affirming this accomplishment -J.A.B. %

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