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Giant Red Planet Mars: What's really going on? Rumors are, there is someone other than I They're hiding where I can't see if I try Some say they’re pint-size, big heads, and huge eclipse black eyes Never wearing a disguise Some say they're green Some say they’ve been seen Have been found and hidden out of sight, long ago People are horrified and mortify to say otherwise and forgo Kidnaping earthlings And transported to distant headings Unknown True or false, I don’t know Who am I to say otherwise? We just go with the flow and compromise We can’t blow away rumors Crawl away just because we’re late bloomers What knowledge we possess is our own We’ve never been shown Are we prone to fear? At things that we hear On Mars surface, Observed by countless boisterous Rumors, three dome cities thought to be found Capstone mound Possible a pyramid buried deep underground Landscape that could transform Caused by windstorm Does it have a connection with our Egypt’s pyramid forms? Not a trick of the light and shadows from the stars It’s really bizarre mystery of what constitutes the giant red planet Mars Is someone else here on earth hidden where we can’t see? Do we learn from them or go on our own way thinking we’re the only ones and let be 6/27/2015
Contest Name: Subject Mars Sponsor: Joe Maverick

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Date: 7/27/2015 1:57:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Eve! Brilliant work!
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:28:00 AM
As to life on Mars, Eve, the best people to ask live on Saturn- give them a ring sometime. Great write, well done, Viv x
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:14:00 PM
EVE Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:58:00 PM
I would love to think we weren't the only ones Eve - a great descriptive write - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:14:00 PM
A good entry. There GOT to be something out there! We can't, simply can't, be just the ones in the entire Universe? Food for thoughts.
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Date: 7/6/2015 8:22:00 AM
Nicely penned Eve. Good luck for the contest.
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Date: 7/5/2015 7:02:00 PM
Hi Eve...this is insightful and captivating write...enjoyed reading this narrative tonight...cheers, 7bang
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Date: 7/5/2015 7:43:00 PM
Thank you, Thabang, for your inspiring complement . Hugs eve
Date: 6/29/2015 10:47:00 AM
hey, you went beyond what most have done with YOUR entry. you must be hearing some really interesting things about Mars. Would be amazing if it were true!!
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Date: 6/29/2015 4:34:00 PM
Growing up we heard the rumors of Roswell UFO incident where they had found a space ship with dead alien that had crushed here on earth and the government covered it up, stories they said were true Then the other info was just research http://www.foxnews.com/science/2015/06/24/truth-is-out-there-did-nasa-rover-find-pyramid-on-mars/ http://www.ufosightingsdaily.com/2014/12/three-dome-cities-found-on-mars-dec-11.html Hanger 1, Thank you for the wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 6/28/2015 10:35:00 PM
A mysterious and thought provoking poem, Eve. I enjoyed the imagery and wonderful rhyming. Fantastic!... Good luck in Joe's contest!
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Date: 6/29/2015 4:37:00 PM
Kelly, anything we hear is mysterious but I'm the type that I have to see it before I believe it. Thank you for your inspiring compliment and good luck. Hugs eve
Date: 6/28/2015 3:33:00 PM
Eve, this is terrific, you bring up all the perfect questions, a big fat 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, apply within
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Date: 6/28/2015 3:48:00 PM
I just love you you make me smile, thank you so much for the very inspirational compliment and the fat 7. You are such a great writer with a lot of empathy for everyone don't change. Hugs dear friend
Date: 6/28/2015 12:54:00 PM
- Rumors or not ..... it's exciting to think about - a fabulous write dear Eve - I wish you luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/28/2015 3:50:00 PM
I'm always looking into the skies and truly wonder. Thank you for the inspiring compliment and the good luck. Hugs dear friend Eve

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