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July 30, 2023
Placed 1st: This or That, Vol 19 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title Chosen: Red Moon Rising

Red moon rising, a globe ruby, an opulent theme, A scarlet smile, a sight tranquil, a heavenly dream, Weaves fabric of passions deep, as desires gleam, Notions-romantic, undulating joy on stellar stream. Hues iridescent paint a canvas of chromatic skies Luring gazes, inflaming fervor of enamored eyes, Glued to vision, intimate pleas of hearts surmise, Inscribing crimson, where motifs moonstruck rise. Embracing red moon, heartbeats rhapsodic tiptoe, Caressing adoration of emotive eventide aglow, Where, breezing affection, zephyrs amatory blow, Whispering sweet-nothings, secrets fervent bestow. As rhythms of our heart, lyrics of our soul rhyme, Avowing pledges revered, through the song of time, Reciting words divine, replaying promises sublime, Under the red moon, we laud, bliss of love in prime. Across celestial beauty, as impulses-angelic scroll, Hypnotizing minds, captivating essence of soul, A red moon tantalizing, O, sensuously we extol, Weaving fabric of passions fantasies moonlit cajole.

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Joe Maverick

Date: 11/22/2023 10:59:00 PM

Red it. ' this really extolls Vijay comments to cajole.'

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/6/2023 8:26:00 AM

Wonderfully crafted words about the red moon. I like your personification of the red moon. Awesome alliteration as well. I look forward to the nights when a red moon appears. They are a marvel. Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/23/2023 6:45:00 AM

I'm absolutely in marvel of your pristine wordplay, rhymes, alliteration and marvelous vocabulary.. The concept of 'red moon" Is sufficient enough to enchant anyone's heart and i couldn't stop myself from reading this piece and reaching until the end.. It all flowed so beautifully, with different shades of red and graceful descriptions.. Writes like these just make my soul happy, to the core, such a poetic treat!

Ink Empress

Date: 8/16/2023 10:54:00 AM

This is one of those poems that would make any reader stop and catch their breath as they continue reading again. Wow! Those slight alliterations, descriptive language rhymes and flow of your imagery makes this an impeccable write. Brilliant poem. One of the most exquisite ones iv read on moon .. and very fitting, as the new moon blesses our night skies again. I love your use of colors too! Passionate with a romantic touch

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2023 4:25:00 AM

So very kind of you. Much appreciate--many thanks. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You are a shining presence on my page.

Silent One

Date: 8/16/2023 9:19:00 AM

You write rhymes so well.. as always your poetry is full of great verses using perfect vocabulary.. a very talented poet you are.. inspiring also...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2023 4:23:00 AM

Thank you, SO. Glad to see you again. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Deb M

Date: 8/16/2023 4:18:00 AM

What can l say that hasn't already been said Vijay!!….another Vijay beauty!! Just lovely my friend….Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2023 4:22:00 AM

Thank you my friend. You are very kind as always.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/15/2023 10:06:00 AM

Slowly I'm trying to recapture my old friends. Takes time. Loved the alliteration and stunning imagery and vocabulary.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2023 4:22:00 AM

Welcome back Victor. Glad you are writing again. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/15/2023 5:15:00 AM

My good friend, this is truly exceptional poetry from your golden pen. I did so enjoy reading this very fine poem!! Verses that sing to this old poet's heart. A gam and a new fav for me! God bless.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2023 4:21:00 AM

Honored by your comments and your FAVE. Many thanks Robert. So special to read your comments.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/14/2023 3:40:00 PM

Soothing and fulfilling verses Vijay. A romantic, sensuous write my friend. Belated congratulations on a wonderful win my friend. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2023 4:20:00 AM

Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Debjani Mitra

Date: 8/14/2023 2:14:00 AM

King of romance , emperor of Poems..simply captivating....thats how Poetry should be. lots to learn from your writing

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2023 4:20:00 AM

Glad to see you again. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/12/2023 5:57:00 AM

As alway a gem but this time a fav . Also your poetry is leagues beyond some of us and congratulations on your very deserved win. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/17/2023 4:19:00 AM

Many thanks Jennifer. Always a joy when you visit.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/9/2023 6:02:00 PM

So smooth like a silken touch . One that keeps giving in its intensity and sensuousness. Your gift for words continues to grow Vijay . I have missed your poems. Did you write as a child? Just curious . Belated congratulations on your win for this gem . Susan :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/13/2023 4:43:00 AM

Always a delight to see you on my page. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks, Susan.

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/8/2023 7:20:00 PM

Vijay, just how wonderful to come back and read you. Just a joy for me :) And, WOW! You sure are still so very romantic and making the hearts smiling here. Of course I love it! Stunning poem, my friend. And congratulations on your win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/13/2023 4:42:00 AM

Glad to see you again, Akkina. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2023 3:44:00 PM

so beautiful, Vijay. Big congrats on your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/13/2023 4:41:00 AM

Many thanks, Andrea--much appreciate.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/8/2023 4:22:00 AM

Live velvet, your words sooth the mood in their capacity to extoll the sweet and sensual strings of love! Vijay you are truly a master at his!! Happy Tuesday!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/13/2023 4:41:00 AM

Thank you Mike. Always appreciate your visit and comments.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/7/2023 3:46:00 PM

Lush imagery here Veej. Your poems are always worthy of many visits

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/13/2023 4:40:00 AM

Many thanks Tom--much appreciate.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/7/2023 11:43:00 AM

Stunning! I love Red Moon Rising. Your excellent vocabulary brings me to another place. I very much enjoyed this, my friend! Excellent :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/7/2023 3:59:00 PM

Thank you friend. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate your supportive comments.

Timothy Ray

Date: 8/6/2023 10:23:00 PM

wow....wow....wow.....duly note fellow wordsmiths....i am left wordless

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/7/2023 3:58:00 PM

So very kind of you Tim. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 8/6/2023 9:27:00 PM

Another beautiful gem Vijay, you paint such incredible images with your pen. This is another masterpiece.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/7/2023 3:58:00 PM

Thank you, BJ--I appreciate your kind feedback.

Deb M

Date: 8/6/2023 3:48:00 PM

Vibrant imagery and poetically beautiful Vijay…..you never fail to produce such amazing poetry! Always Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/7/2023 3:57:00 PM

Glad to see you again my friend. Much appreciate, Deb--many thanks.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/6/2023 9:11:00 AM

Excellent penning as usual, Vijay:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/7/2023 3:57:00 PM

Much appreciate, my friend. Many thanks for your kind remarks and special thanks for sponsoring contests.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/6/2023 8:12:00 AM

"As rhythms of our heart, lyrics of our soul rhyme, Avowing pledges revered, through the song of time" - Indeed, highly poetic. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/7/2023 3:56:00 PM

Many thanks Christuraj--much appreciate.

Bill Baker

Date: 8/5/2023 4:28:00 PM

Congrats on your contest win, my friend. A FAV for my list. Your imagery is always inspiring, and the rhythm of your poetry a joy to read, Vijay. Have a pleasant week! Bill

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/7/2023 3:56:00 PM

Much appreciate your kind remarks, Bill. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/5/2023 6:09:00 AM

"As rhythms of our heart, lyrics of our soul rhyme, Avowing pledges revered, through the song of time," -- enchanting imagery and romantic, beautifully poetic use of the sound and cadence of rapturous language -- Love it!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2023 8:55:00 AM

You are so very kind my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Joe. Many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 8/5/2023 12:15:00 AM

Red moon rising with a scarlet smile, Beautiful write Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2023 8:54:00 AM

Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.