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Red Moon

Happiest of times, sometimes we have to repent, Although Ascending lunar a fortunate omen, Yet Breathtaking tides of full moon, can cause torrent, Sad moments thrust utmost emotions, can be a boon, Add up to unsurpassed beauty of the eclipsed Red Moon ! Written on 27/4/14 Sponsor- Dave Wood Now for contest 'Moon' by Francine Roberts

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/10/2014 2:16:00 PM

Dear Dr. Upma, Indeed, watching the red moon created quite a variety of emotions --- some good and some fearful. It was quite a beautiful site to behold though. Congratulations on your win! Love and blessings, Carolyn

Mark Peterson

Date: 5/10/2014 1:14:00 PM

Yes, I think you caught the spirit of the whole thing just right. I'm alive, my repentance deferred. Congratulations.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/8/2014 1:51:00 PM

dr,upma, very festive with cool imagery .. congrats on your win.. huggs

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/8/2014 1:13:00 AM

Mother Nature can be as dangerous, as she is beautiful. You wrote very well on the subject of the red moon. Great work, Dr. Upma! Congratulations on your win!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/7/2014 4:00:00 PM

I love your take Doc Upma congrats on win hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/7/2014 8:13:00 AM

Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, Dr.Upma

Roy Jerden

Date: 4/30/2014 7:52:00 AM

Good one! Good luck in the contest!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/28/2014 3:38:00 AM

LOvely and expressive poem DR. Interesting how the moon is an ever fount of inspiration! gl in the contest. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 5/7/2014 4:44:00 AM

...and back again, this time with congratulations....paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/29/2014 4:57:00 AM

Thanks Paul for the like n the wishes ! Yes true I hv always loved writing on moon !

Len Gasun

Date: 4/27/2014 2:59:00 AM

An excellent portrait of the red moon through nice observations my dear friend Dr. Upma. I love every line especially the last two. A winner for me, yet I wish you good luck in the contest. I'm so honored to read it this afternoon and be the first one to comment;)). Have a great wkend! love and big hugs, Leonora

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/29/2014 4:53:00 AM

Thanks for ur lovely n encouraging comments Leonora n the wishes too !