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Red Innocence

brilliant red robin preens and chirps with all his heart rosy songs of spring Written on 3/2/2016

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John Michaels

Date: 2/16/2017 1:32:00 PM

What a lovely Haiku to see off the last vestigates of Winter. Congrulations on a well-deserved win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/16/2017 6:34:00 PM

Thanks, John. :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/5/2016 12:51:00 AM

You make spring sounds come alive in this lovely haiku Laura! Congratulations on your win. I missed entering this one it closed so fast. Cheers, Connie #7 from me.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/4/2016 2:13:00 PM

Hi Laura, your Haiku does sing. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I Love the lilt in this Haiku. A seven.

Constance La France

Date: 3/4/2016 1:45:00 AM

Laura, this is wonderful and so tranquil, congratulations and I am loving this 7 ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2016 8:21:00 PM

Cute one. I love the last line. Congrats.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/3/2016 10:46:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Glad you liked my "tweet" littl' poem ;)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/3/2016 7:36:00 PM

Congratulations in the contest "Red" win, Laura! Hugs dear friend

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/3/2016 10:45:00 PM

Thank you, Eve :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/3/2016 7:15:00 PM

Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/3/2016 10:45:00 PM

Thank you, Nayda :)

Lu Loo

Date: 3/3/2016 5:10:00 PM

Laura, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/3/2016 6:35:00 PM

Thank you, Laura :)