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Red Ink

As I ponder so weak and weary I read your story, it was dreary. No need to thank me for the markup I digress, is this the wrong tree to bark up? However red your paper might be Loving eyes did set it gently free, Of errors do I speak unjust? My quill made many a thrust. I hope you find that I loved it too Wrote entirely over, just for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/17/2014 12:44:00 AM
This is quite the intriguing write my friend! I really enjoyed reading it this evening! What a fabulous poem, such a grand piece! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/16/2014 7:51:00 PM
My dearest friend and lover of history i love this poem that you've pennned tonight and so I've made one for you of a time period i love also it is called the coloseum and i am about to release unto the post mark of the soup. check it out. cheri
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Date: 2/16/2014 3:50:00 PM
Wow! That's all I have to say, speechless. Gorgeous and beautiful. Thank you for sharing! - Mike
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Date: 2/16/2014 12:31:00 PM
ha! love it, especially the ending!
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Date: 2/16/2014 12:19:00 PM
- Comforting and beautifully written, Tim - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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