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red giant - fire star stellar core growing so old crimson sphere explodes ************************* March 2, 2016 Color Red: Silent One

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Date: 6/7/2020 9:32:00 AM
I remember learning about this when I was in middle school. Can not recall if they know that this is how our star is going to die, but I think it is. Glad I chose to read this one today.
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Date: 3/4/2016 2:29:00 PM
Hi Lin, I enjoyed, The imagery paints its vision in the mind. Excellent write Lin, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/4/2016 2:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vlad.
Date: 3/3/2016 11:45:00 PM
Enjoyed crimson sphere. Congratulations....
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Date: 3/4/2016 4:58:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/3/2016 8:25:00 PM
Nice one with the added picture! Congrats, Lin.
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Date: 3/3/2016 10:39:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/3/2016 7:42:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win:) Hugs dear friend
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Date: 3/3/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thanks Eve, and hugs back to you, sweets.
Date: 3/3/2016 7:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Lin
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Date: 3/3/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/3/2016 5:12:00 PM
Lin, congrats on your placement in the contest. Perfect imagery, as always :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/3/2016 5:23:00 PM
Thanks, I thought yours was best of all ;)
Date: 3/2/2016 10:28:00 PM
a 7 love the color red explosive :)
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Date: 3/3/2016 3:51:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ;)

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