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Red Cherry - Collom Lune

Red cherry splashes in sweating drink, smile flashes. My first date. {Form is Collom Lune. Inspired by Andrea's pretty picture #2}

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Date: 11/11/2017 8:29:00 AM
Delightful poem... what the drink the only sweaty thing? Joys of first dates... ;-)
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Date: 5/15/2016 1:57:00 PM
Nicely penned.
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Date: 8/16/2015 11:01:00 PM
Ah what a wonderful imagery Isaiah! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/16/2015 10:18:00 PM
A refreshingly clever write, Isaiah! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/16/2015 8:42:00 PM
Hi Isaiah, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:25:00 AM
Isaiah, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
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Date: 8/15/2015 9:36:00 AM
I love the double meaning....very clever, Isaiah !! Congrats to you !
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:44:00 AM
Isaiah, paints a vivid picture of one of life's more awkward moments...
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:24:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Isaiah:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:12:00 AM
This brought a smile to my face, nicely done :) Grats on your win!
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Date: 8/15/2015 6:06:00 AM
You took this out of the fruit box, Isaiah! Great take! Congratulations on your podium finish! // paul
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Date: 8/15/2015 1:00:00 AM
Isaiah, this is REALLY smart. The way you have the drink sweating, the way you would be sweating yourself on your first date, and that little rhyme of splashes with flashes thrown in. Excellent work!! Congrats.
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Date: 8/4/2015 4:11:00 AM
delightful imagery Isaiah:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/4/2015 4:01:00 AM
ohh, you make feel giddy with this pleasant lune, isaiah!... wonderfully scribed!.. huggs
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Date: 8/4/2015 2:05:00 AM
The idea delights but the imagery even more...:-))) Best wishes , Isaiah! Kim
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:10:00 AM
Very lovely Isaiah! Gl in contest! Sure will do well!
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