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Red Bull

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Red Bull

~ADHD~

Beautiful Coffee spree
Close your eyes and fell high like a tree
Nothing beats the sugar in my energy
I can't live my life caffeine free
Somebody stop me!!!!!


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  1. Date: 6/21/2014 12:41:00 PM
    Ah, the drink of champions. Hope this comment catches up with you. Very well done, my friend.... Robert.

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 8:58:00 AM
    Hi, my dearest sis! I'm stopping by once more to read again another poem of yours. And, I can remember this lovely writes of yours so well. So love it and enjoyed so much again. How I wish, I've red bull or coffee at my side 'cuz of my slow internet speed now. I've been here for 2 hrs but I've not done much. So, i'm coming back hopefully tom. Hope to hear from you soonloving sis & BFF of mine. Good night fr. my side of the world! Biggest hugs w/ kisses! lovem4evrLeonora

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:01:00 AM
    Coffee tastes so much better than Red Bull. Of course, after I put my sugar and cream in it. You made me laugh with this one. loved it.....Roger

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 11:11:00 AM
    hmmnnn!!! I am not drinking coffee but I think i like it now, lol. This is a great Haiku of my Great Poet!!! I want to be the first to greet advance Merry Christmas because we're now in -er months! love and hugs, leonora

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 11:26:00 AM
    can't be stop huh! keep coffeeing.nice expression.

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 6:09:00 AM
    lol.."somebody stop me"..love this Haiku..I noticed that it was posted on X-mas..smiles

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 6:52:00 AM
    I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry this morning. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment P.D. Love, Carol"

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 1:06:00 PM
    And even relief in her pains and restlessness. Keep doing this as many times as you can for 2-3 minutes to give her energy after taking it from God (Jesus). This is called Rekhi the science introduced by Gautama Buddha. Your mother would get lot of relief and she may recover also. I would pray for her health recovery my friend. Please take care of her and keep yourself strong. Love and best wishes..Ravindra

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 1:05:00 PM
    Good Day PD. I am worried about your mother my friend. When you sit near her please try to give her courage & strength by your words. Also gently give a loving touch on her forehead. If she is in pains just put one of your bowl shaped palm on her forehead, while keeping the other (Right one) open towards sky to obtain Gods energy by Right hand & to pass on that energy through your slightly folded palm of left hand. In this way the mind of your mother would get lot of peace & comfort. To continue

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 10:13:00 AM
    can't start my day without! nothing like a good brew =)

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 11:19:00 AM
    Yes indeed a cup of coffee, a piece of toast and thou beside me on a Sunday morning. Good write here PD. God \Bless, JB PS Entered your contest with the receipes. JB :)

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 7:03:00 AM
    Wishing God's best for you! Take care and thanks for the blessing you are to your fellow soupers! Take care! JP

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Hi P.D. Very insteresting poem. Coffee has become a comfort and a crutch. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 1:39:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, PD. You ARE unstoppable

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 9:46:00 PM
    STill love this! and thanks for the contest win!

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 10:16:00 PM
    OH PD MY BFF.. I AM SAD FOR U WITH THIS DRAMA TOO.. HOPE ALL GETS RESOLVED.. START THE NEW YEAR POSITIVE ..NOT ALL THIS MESS .. FAMILY IS SO PRECIOUS AND IMPORTANT.. ROYAL IS YOUNG.. KEEP HER IN PRAYER.. THANKXX FOR UPLIFTING WORDS LUV.. RON HAS BEEN AN ACE NUMBER ONE GUY.. HE EVEN BOUGHT ME A NEW RING FOR MY PINKY TODAY TO CHASE MY BLUES AWAY..DON'T KNOW HOW I COULD DO THIS WITHOUT HIM AND GREAT FRIENDS LIKE U... LUV.. ALWAYS..BFF

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 4:01:00 PM
    Do you own a restaurant? Or are you a waitress? I like the line"taste the sunrise"a lot. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 9:20:00 AM
    What a great way to greet the morning; first the smell then the sip ahhhhh!

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 7:45:00 PM
    coffee breaking through the mist, brings me online does insist, sometimes....bliss

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 6:44:00 PM
    Baked just right I'm sure, enjoyed your haiku PD. thank you for stopping by, let the sunshine travel, let me know when it reaches your heart, hugs, vie

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