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Red and Gold

Red And Gold (Hourglass) Like to keep autumn all year the seasonal splendor soft and gentle breeze sparkle of love red and gold nature bright bright nature red and gold sparkle of love soft and gentle breeze the seasonal splendor Like to keep autumn all year Erich J. Goller Copyright 9.20.2011 “Hourglass” by George L.Ellison 12 lines 7/6/5/4/3/2/2/3/4/5/6/7 syllables Rhyming optional, any subject…

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2012 9:21:00 AM

I forgot the name of the style, but this is also one of those mirror poems that repeats the same lines backwards. Wish I could remember that name, and I don't know if Soup has it listed as a poetry form . Anyway, it's very lovely, and too bad Hourglass is not listed as a form here.

Erich Goller
Date: 5/6/2012 9:51:00 AM

thank you very much Andrea, there a some styles Soup does not list, Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/21/2012 1:58:00 PM

Yes, autumn is lovely so is this poem Erich. - Like the "Hourglass" form. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

Erich Goller
Date: 4/21/2012 2:21:00 PM

thank you very much Anne Lise,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich