Red

Red is the cry of roses pierced by thorns.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2014 5:37:00 PM

BAUKE, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda

Bauke Kamstra
Date: 4/2/2014 8:00:00 PM

Thank you Linda. : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2014 1:35:00 AM

Beautiful imagery and nice take, congrats on the fine win, bauke

Bauke Kamstra
Date: 4/1/2014 3:02:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Mehta. : )

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/31/2014 5:51:00 PM

Your poem was really interesting. You have managed to get a lot of depth into so few words. A great poem, Bauke! Congratulations on your win!

Bauke Kamstra
Date: 3/31/2014 6:24:00 PM

Oh, I won? Cool! Thanks for your comment Kelly! : )

Paul Callus

Date: 3/22/2014 7:18:00 AM

strongly expressed. // paul

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 3/22/2014 3:31:00 AM

Deep indeed, full of connotations, full of life's texture, like red blood and roses afraid to be pierced. I'll post it on my blog vcobor.blogspot.gr next days

Bauke Kamstra
Date: 3/22/2014 7:52:00 AM

Thank you very much for liking it. Please let me know when you do.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2014 10:29:00 AM

this is deep... I like the haiku... Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2014 7:44:00 AM

- Well done "Red" in your haiku, Bauke ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)