Red

Red roses glisten in coolness of morning dew as red robins chirp The sun peeks over the hill Warming the crimson petals 5 -12 - 2013

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Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/22/2013 7:18:00 AM

Oh Wow Joseph. Many congrats for this great win.

Donna Jones

Date: 5/21/2013 9:43:00 AM

So beautiful...congratulations

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/21/2013 9:04:00 AM

picture perfect, congrats on your win

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2013 8:45:00 AM

Very creative and colorful Tanka..Congrats...Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/21/2013 7:21:00 AM

Joseph a very fine write on the color Red. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/21/2013 1:11:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Joseph, well done xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2013 12:49:00 AM

this one was so sweet for the color red, Joseph. and that last line sealed the deal!!! Congrats

Joseph May
Date: 5/21/2013 9:11:00 AM

Thank you for my placement in your contest Andrea..it was a good contest topic

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2013 9:01:00 PM

this is an awesome choice of RED , for Andrea... Tanka me a color. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/20/2013 8:06:00 PM

beautiful...a picture that delights. congrats. BG

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/14/2013 10:03:00 AM

so lovely, so elegant

Len Gasun

Date: 5/13/2013 5:02:00 PM

A very beautiful poem with a very wonderful image! I love it. A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend Joseph May. Thank you so much as well for your warm congratulatory comments. Belated congrats as well for your wins. Good luck and best wishes. Love and hugs, Leonora