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Red

Oh red Oh red my orban shade oh red 6 years 8 month i looked for my orban shade of red If red is blue and blue is red Then my sole is blue for red You were always right in front of me But a word could not be said Oh red Oh red my bluest shade of red

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Date: 10/27/2009 7:05:00 AM
Pretty good poem. Would you pls comment -three apples....thankfully. Wishing you all the best.
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Date: 10/19/2009 1:03:00 PM
Welcome to our soup family. I wish you success in all your writing endeavours.keep writing
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