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Oh sweet rain: What? A siren somewhere draws nearer and nearer Blue lights are flashing in my rear-view mirror! Yes officer?: What's the problem? I'm legal; what IS this about? I sure wasn't speeding; is my tail-light burnt out? Oh no sir: You were stopped when I noticed ever so clearly That your car was swerving rather severely Ahh, yes officer: I'm sure you'll understand, sympathize and agree I was trying to finish a poem, you see Try-ing-to-fin-ish: Sir, calm down, just relax and please take your time Do you mind if I ask the SUB-JECT of this rhyme? CERTAINLY not officer: It's about how the street-lights shine and reflect Upside down when it rains and the pavement gets wet Very good sir: Next time call a TAXI or pack a bicycle! May I ask you to step outside your vehicle?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/8/2017 7:40:00 AM
I love this whimsical poem! I can see myself doing this! LOL! Congrats, Tim!
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:55:00 PM
AWESOMELY DONE... SKAT
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Date: 1/29/2015 3:53:00 PM
great humour Tim congrats on win hugs
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:03:00 PM
Loved this witty write Tim many congrats on your win in the humour contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/26/2014 5:11:00 PM
Hey Grats on your third place, i liked this one, and yes you know I do the same thing, I drive and write, thank goodness I live out in the middle of nowhere I just have to watch for deer, but the peace of driving is the perfect time for muses' to whisper in your ear, always awesome my friend :) :)
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Date: 6/25/2014 7:49:00 PM
lol I HEAR YOU CHER oopsie ;) nothing like a ride to make me write, a pen, an old receipt or a napkin [Kleenex are too flagile] and the center of the steering wheel! Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/25/2014 5:13:00 PM
What a twist Tim...congrats
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Date: 6/25/2014 7:10:00 AM
hahaha.. :D nice nice one Tim!! like this dialogue!!! great one!! Congratulations!!!, Olive eloisa with a :)
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Date: 6/25/2014 3:48:00 AM
Lovely dialogue! Pity the officer did not bother to have a good look at the street-lights' reflection! Congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:37:00 AM
Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,
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Date: 6/24/2014 8:33:00 PM
hello Tim, once again.. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2010 2:18:00 PM
LOL..I hear ya. Dear one..I think I'm MANY poems UP on you! Get your reading glasses on "Your assignment should you chose to take it is to read my last 10 verses!" and comment! Light & Love
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Date: 1/9/2010 1:21:00 AM
Your conversational writes are very witty. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 12/17/2009 8:48:00 AM
Tim, this is not only great wit, it is fun. I see why Carolyn writes with you now. Well done.
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Date: 12/15/2009 6:04:00 AM
Congrats on your collab with Carolyn.. great job ...great poem... great theme.. Tim.. well done.. congrats.. again... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/13/2009 11:34:00 PM
Thanks for your welcome blog comments today Tim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/13/2009 3:13:00 PM
Quite witty Tim. Good job. Yes I remember old Eli wallace standing on a Head stone yelling Blonde, Blonde! Smile! Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/13/2009 2:33:00 PM
WITTY! (Of course, I may be only half right.) Now, put that pen away when you're driving or I'll be the one pulling you over for a scolding. Bad boy! You best not write and drive or Santa will bring you a well-deserved lump of coal. I'm putting him on notice to be watching you! Love, carolyn
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Date: 12/13/2009 9:19:00 AM
What a fun poem. Good use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Thank you for your thoughts and prayers. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 12/13/2009 8:53:00 AM
I see your pen has had its "resurrection" .. good to read this one.. great humor .. I was married to a policeman long time ago.. they don't fool around (well not in the sense of ticket giving)... this is such a good write.. enjoyed .. laughing out loud now as I skip out the door... luv.. "Sweetie"
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Date: 12/13/2009 7:59:00 AM
I love it!!!!!!!!!!! This delightful poem reminds me of myself...quite often I am writing in my head ...dreaming of a poem, while zipping along. The trick is to do it while SOMEONE ELSE IS DRIVING!!! :) LOL! Great poem, Mr. Tim!!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/13/2009 7:39:00 AM
Hi Tim, Too cute! A wonderful rhyme. You had me going there for minute. I just can see the look on the policemans face when you told him you were writing a poem. LOL! It sounds like something I would do! I needed a good laugh this morning too! Thanks so much hun for your feedback on Christmas Tree. I will try it. Here's wishing you and yours a wonderful holiday season filled with much love. Love Light Patty
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