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Reckless Abandon

On the deserted beach, underneath the moonlight, That was where we kissed, I fell in love that night. It wasn't just the summer heat that caused my heart to melt. This steamy summer love was like nothing I'd ever felt. The brightness of your eyes caused my heart to swell. On that deserted beach is surely where I fell. The touch of your hands set my soul to ignite. I never felt like this before, a feeling I couldn't fight. With reckless abandon we joined there on the beach. With the stars shining down, heaven did we reach. Wild and passionate we were throughout the night. Still wrapped in each others arms to greet the morning light. Our hearts, our lips , our souls were one. The heights we reached will compare with none.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/19/2010 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations Francine on your well deserved win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:57:00 PM
And congratulations for you, now that you have won, my dear! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:53:00 AM
Congrats Francine on your winning poem in the ladies part of Steamy Summer Love with this lovely write ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 2:35:00 PM
thanks for catching that Sharon, I have fixed it now , much appreciated
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Date: 7/13/2010 2:27:00 PM
Super job with this sonnet. All the required elements are present (Just an 'I' missing from 'Still'- 3rd line from end). Best of luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/13/2010 12:24:00 PM
enjoyed, very passionate write!!
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Date: 7/13/2010 7:21:00 AM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:15:00 AM
Great description of a passionate evening, Francine. I'd forgotten what this was like. Best wishes in Constance's contest! Love, your birthday buddy
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:53:00 PM
lovely write on summer love,, good flow on rhyming,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 7/12/2010 7:11:00 PM
A nice entry to the vontest. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/12/2010 7:05:00 PM
Sorry C.L., I went by the definition here at Poetry soup and the example they showed was by Roberts Frost, it was also 7 rhyming couplets, as my first attempt I thought I'd go by the defintion from this site. Please excuse me if I was mistaken
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Date: 7/12/2010 6:59:00 PM
Hey, I think you did a great job on your sonnet. I bet Constance will really like it. Good luck in the conest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/12/2010 6:27:00 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
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