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Recital of the Waves

A low surge of words, In mellifluous cadence: Aquatic concert.

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Date: 9/8/2009 8:44:00 PM

Beautiful... I'm A Water - Baby... Something about the motion of the ocean and I could float on this haiku... Keep 'em coming Raul MoonBee

Date: 9/5/2009 11:18:00 AM

Beautiful... You're Good at those Haiku(s) Read Several - like em' MoonBee

Date: 9/4/2009 11:53:00 AM

Superb Haiku, another delight on this Friday night>>James

Date: 9/4/2009 4:11:00 AM

Raul, this Haiku flows so beautifully. Thank you for sharing your amazing writing with us again today. Love, Carol

Date: 9/3/2009 8:44:00 PM

I can feel and hear the waves!...jim

Date: 9/3/2009 7:17:00 PM

Beautifuly haiku, Raul. I love the concept of an "Aquatic concert." Love, Carolyn

Date: 9/3/2009 1:07:00 PM

--musical waves-in a low surge of words in one sweet motion --an aquatic concert--love the last line--bravo--charma

Date: 9/3/2009 12:24:00 PM

I love the concert those waves give. Being by the water is so peaceful for me. Nice use of personification in this poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Date: 9/3/2009 11:15:00 AM

After reading you work I dont think i can even think about writing another haiku..lets just go to the beach! love, BG

Date: 9/3/2009 9:50:00 AM

Aquatic concert...you are robbing the universe of all the good metaphors..LOL..another number one stunner from the king...

Date: 9/3/2009 9:50:00 AM

Soup mail.

Date: 9/3/2009 8:46:00 AM

You're a true poet. Lovely haiku. Exact wording. Wishing you all the best.

Date: 9/3/2009 8:06:00 AM

And yes...the ocean speaks it's own language!