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Rebirth

In low tones we chatted On the steps to her porch, We talked of the decades Since I’d carried her torch— Of love we knew nothing During young naïve years Of kissing and fondling ‘Til I left her in tears, For the navy enticed With ships and adventure: I sailed away keenly Aware that I missed her, Each ivory cloud roiling I watched sculpt her face, And the foam in ships’ wakes Emulated her grace. How her leer glowered down With each floozy I’d bed; Her glare did accost me From the face that I wed. But that marriage was fey, On a short vine it died: I had loved only once So to find her I tried: Thus we sat on those steps Last night swapping stories, We confessed of our lives, Our failures and glories … And the kiss that welled up While lightning bugs popped, Led haltingly bedside Where our slack clothing dropped. We then gripped and embraced Through a torrent of mirth— Time relented at last And our love found rebirth. October 22, 2016 1st place: Long Distance Love Contest/October 19, 2016 For 1st Place Only Poetry Contest Laura Loo

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Date: 10/22/2016 9:03:00 PM
not long distance love when you bedded floozies. I'm honest and poetry soup might swipe it's comment. whatever. when you unclothed her she was still one of your doozies of a floozy.
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David Bose
Date: 10/22/2016 9:34:00 PM
Thanks, Holly, for taking time to give feedback. Please consider that fictional characters, like real people, make mistakes and eventually find redemption. I guess poetry and prose would be extremely bland and unappealing if only perfect, unerring people were portrayed. Thanks again, Dave

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