Rebirth

Burn me, shake me, Throw me down and break me. I have no fear, for I will rise. Hate me, whip me, In boiling hot lava dip me. I have no fear, for I will rise. Cut me, stab me, Tear me apart then grab me. I have no fear, for I will rise. Because like a Phoenix, I rise from the ashes.

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Steven Henderson

Date: 3/24/2015 4:32:00 PM

Very nice Nicholas...enjoyed the flow of words. Peace and blessings.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2015 6:18:00 PM

Nicolas, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 4:05:00 PM

Nicolas, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/15/2015 12:14:00 AM

Powerful and beautiful!