Rebirth

The still horizon, Gestates over the calm night; Birthing morning sun.

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Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 6/27/2009 1:57:00 PM

wow! this is absolutely brilliant Raul.....soory I haven't been on in a long while but ur poems r still perfect...lol....love n smiles Maryam*

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 6/27/2009 10:17:00 AM

Brillant just brilliant. This is great Raul. Wonderful job. Love Elizabeth

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/26/2009 9:39:00 AM

Great. Sara

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/26/2009 9:15:00 AM

Another classic haiku from you.

James Fraser

Date: 6/26/2009 8:43:00 AM

Super Haiku Raul, you keep surpassing your others>>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/26/2009 8:33:00 AM

Love the middle line..."Gestates over the calm night"...great job!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/26/2009 3:16:00 AM

Raul, this is "bottled purity' wow!!! and thanks for warm comments, jmg

Brian Strand

Date: 6/25/2009 11:38:00 PM

Lovely phrasing Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/25/2009 10:10:00 PM

this goes to my favs--it is one of your beautiful gems,the horizon and the birthing of the sun each morning always mesmerize me--serenity,light and beauty here surely sends the reader in a good flowing mood---bravo--charma