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Rebellion

Drenched in colorless memories Melancholy dripping from his eyes That gushes like rain upon dead grey buildings, The whip of thunder as a baby’s cries Falling upon the deaf ears Of all those venerable and wise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/20/2016 10:21:00 PM
Deepsnshi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/9/2011 7:08:00 AM
I like
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Date: 9/5/2011 9:04:00 AM
a very interesting write, a lot said in a few words, i like this, shows a mastery of the english language, good poetry
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