Rebellion

They want to control Force me to live by their rules They can't see my heart.

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E.J. Smith

Date: 2/3/2013 3:56:00 AM

Thanks Linda!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/2/2013 4:03:00 PM

E.J.,, a beautiful blessings with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent day... I know I sure am. :-) or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA

E.J. Smith

Date: 3/31/2012 5:58:00 AM

Thanks! I am still rebellious too!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2012 9:41:00 AM

E.J., one acts out when pushed toooo far... i think ..okay!!! I was a rebellious gal...lol..still am... great haiku...pd

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/25/2011 1:42:00 PM

I can relate to this one. "He's a Rebel" was one of my favorite songs when I was in high school. You got to follow your heart if you want to be happy. Vince

Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 9/2/2011 9:39:00 AM

Okay there no unity between anything

E.J. Smith
Date: 9/2/2011 11:01:00 AM

I don't know what that means. Is the poem bad?