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Rebecca

Rotting in the dark regions of toiling life Engulfed in tragedy and unremitting strife Beauty pours forth and floods your green eyes Empty, you fill the voids of my madness Crumpled, you hold me up and decrease my sadness Catching each fall and laughing at my stupidity And filling my life with happiness and humility

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/18/2013 2:41:00 PM
Dear Laura, YOUR Laureatus ledgend in YOUR Divine Dedications of Amazing Acrostics, should be known through-out the Soup.I have met Rebecca(last night) If I had the Talent YOU 2 have when I was YOUR age I would Probably be Famous by now.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:19:00 PM
Awesome!
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Date: 2/3/2012 6:05:00 PM
aww I feelie lovefied lol <3 keep up the great work laura who knows maybe another poem will be publeeshed :D
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/3/2012 6:15:00 PM
:D Thanks, Becca. <3

Book: Shattered Sighs