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Below is the poem entitled REALITY BECKONS which was written by poet Mandy Tams The Golden Girl. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Her flawless beauty caught his eye
His head turned his heart followed
Skin of creamy translucency
Her body motion, he saw it flowed.

As a yacht upon the azure sea
Her body she sashayed down the street
Skilfully tacking from windward to lee
His eyes and heart all at once did meet.

His body yearned to feel her close
Her hair flicked windward calling him
His skin tingled inside his clothes
Feeling stirrings an exciting whim

Growth did begin but stung back to reality
With his wife by his side afraid of his mortality.

© 10/03/2013 ~GG~

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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 9:40:00 AM
    hi just back to this Mandy,, that 3rd line 2nd stanza, is truly a classic, skilfully tacking........ amazing Girl you truly are...

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 1:50:00 AM
    Excellent. Beautiful ending. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 5:10:00 PM
    Yeah..well we've all been stung back to reality ..great job Mandy....

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 3:34:00 PM
    ha! great ending!

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 9:08:00 AM
    The other woman must have very beautiful awesome poem Mandy

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 8:54:00 AM
    haha...back to reality, huh? Great write, Mandy!

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 5:44:00 AM
    This is a very masterful write, done so skillfully my friend! I am enthralled by the splendor of this incredible poem you have written so wonderfully! I loved reading it this morning! Such a great intriguing piece! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 4:52:00 AM
    hahahaha. Good writing and I especially loved the ending. The man with a roving eye and the good wife beside him. Nice rhyming, Mandy :)