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Reality Beckons

Her flawless beauty caught his eye His head turned his heart followed Skin of creamy translucency Her body motion, he saw it flowed. As a yacht upon the azure sea Her body she sashayed down the street Skilfully tacking from windward to lee His eyes and heart all at once did meet. His body yearned to feel her close Her hair flicked windward calling him His skin tingled inside his clothes Feeling stirrings an exciting whim Growth did begin but stung back to reality With his wife by his side afraid of his mortality. © 10/03/2013 ~GG~

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Date: 3/27/2013 9:40:00 AM
hi just back to this Mandy,, that 3rd line 2nd stanza, is truly a classic, skilfully tacking........ amazing Girl you truly are...
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Date: 3/13/2013 1:50:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful ending. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 3/12/2013 5:10:00 PM
Yeah..well we've all been stung back to reality ..great job Mandy....
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Date: 3/12/2013 3:34:00 PM
ha! great ending!
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Date: 3/12/2013 9:08:00 AM
The other woman must have very beautiful awesome poem Mandy
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Date: 3/12/2013 8:54:00 AM
haha...back to reality, huh? Great write, Mandy!
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Date: 3/12/2013 5:44:00 AM
This is a very masterful write, done so skillfully my friend! I am enthralled by the splendor of this incredible poem you have written so wonderfully! I loved reading it this morning! Such a great intriguing piece! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 3/12/2013 4:52:00 AM
hahahaha. Good writing and I especially loved the ending. The man with a roving eye and the good wife beside him. Nice rhyming, Mandy :)
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