Reality

Illusion... illusion Ooh what a confusion Entering the world of spirituality, while Keeping an eye on reality As conclusion of this confusion Reality has always been the illusion

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Nicole King

Date: 10/16/2012 7:25:00 PM

I love the thought in the words. Congrats on your feature. Well deserved.

Rena Kiya

Date: 6/18/2012 12:10:00 PM

oh you should read my work its dark but good

Rena Kiya

Date: 6/18/2012 12:09:00 PM

oh heck yeah im with you all the way im allways livving two lives one in reality here on earth and another in a realm that has become similar to reality one i frequntely live in

Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 4:49:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2012 7:22:00 PM

Hi,Cheryl WOW you sure do know how to rhyme you did a awesome poem!;}Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA }i{

Cheryl Glans
Date: 6/5/2012 12:47:00 PM

thank you my dear. No I don' mind. I think it's great. At your age I loved reading books and poems. I hope you will love poems like your aunt and I do