Real Love

How could You See my pain Include me in the Great Exhange How could You Relate to me Bring me in then Set me free Real love Real love. How could you Believe in me Touch the eyes So I can see How could you Live within Now everyday This begins, Real love Real love. A real love that hopes all things Never fails, believes all things Never asks what it can't give Real love Real love. Words and Music by Peter Hall. Copyright Scot free music.

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/24/2015 2:04:00 PM

Whoa! Outstanding pen Peter! Truly enjoyed your take on true love, and I do surely agree with you dear friend. A 7 from me! Love this sweet piece and you just say it as it suppose to be. True love is always kind and forgiving and never abandons and hurts and betrays at least not in my life book. Have a nice day!:) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^