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Real Love

Symphony is playing softly in the background. He seems to be out more now. He calls me regularly telling me his whereabouts. Then he comes home after his workout. Our relationship is on the up and up. The heights we reach states we are a perfect couple. Our talk about the day brings a closeness. As the clock chimes late, we both sigh for a mental release. We find each night of intimacy to be quite fulfilling. This time we have together, we cherish. Our wedding vows were written by each. We rejoice. We both play our part. Our happiness is based on love and trust. _____________________________________| PENNED ON AUGUST 28, 2014!

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/3/2014 9:37:00 AM

Lovely romantic write, Verlena. Congrats

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/3/2014 9:41:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram... Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/3/2014 9:16:00 AM

Yes yes Verlena it's true love u hv found my friend! Beautiful write ,, congrats on huge win!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/3/2014 9:20:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Upma for the congratulations. Verlena

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/3/2014 7:04:00 AM

Dear Verlena, How wonderful you found such happiness in your marriage. Surely, the emotions you describe represent true love. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/3/2014 8:26:00 AM

Thanks Carolyn for your congratulations. Verlena

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/3/2014 12:33:00 AM

Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest. I enjoy your words. God bless you and happy writing. With love and prayers, Gina

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/3/2014 12:52:00 AM

Thanks you Gina. Verlena

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/1/2014 8:25:00 PM

I'm lovin this poem of comfortable partnetship, its expressed so clearly and graciously Verlena. You've touched the soft side of my heart tonight. Customized wedding vows, happiness and trust, ah, romantic. J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/1/2014 8:30:00 PM

I thank you Justin for your super-awesome response. This is the way romance should form but, also, differentiate.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 8/31/2014 8:28:00 AM

Nice show of your feelings Verlena.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/31/2014 4:51:00 PM

Thanks Brenda for your supportive response. Verlena

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry

Date: 8/31/2014 2:33:00 AM

Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/31/2014 3:44:00 AM

Thanks Shahid for your complimentary remarks. Verlena

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/28/2014 9:59:00 PM

This brings a smile to my face, every night I wait up for my husband to come home from work (which will be in 15 minutes now) just so we have that talk, then intimacy. I love that you are so completely in love, a relationship based on love and trust, that is excellent. :) big smiles sweetie:)

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 11:13:00 PM

Thanks Casarah. However, FYI is I am not married. I was married. A reminiscence that's all. Sending a hug, Verlena