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Warm and real, I want to feel your heart next to mine beating in sweet time, warmth divine. Breast to chest, Soft and strong, stimulating, moving. It's for you I long. Come to me on a starry night. Touch me with your smile. Stroke my hair, and stay with me a while. Speak to me with words sublime. Tell me it's real this time. Lips hungry for your kisses, it's you my heart misses. By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: 2004 "All Rights Reserved"

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Date: 11/1/2016 7:12:00 PM
A very romantic poem Carole, for REAL!
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/1/2016 7:42:00 PM
Thanks, Rick. I am a romantic! Carole
Date: 10/3/2016 5:01:00 PM
Lovely and truly romantic, Carole. Longing and hunger for love can provide the ingredients for sweet anticipation! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/4/2016 6:10:00 PM
So true, Paul. Tnank you for your lovely comment. Carole
Date: 9/22/2016 7:16:00 AM
Shot lines lend this an imperative that brings life to the reading. Well done.
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/23/2016 2:59:00 PM
Tks Keith. Glad you liked it.
Date: 9/21/2016 8:17:00 PM
Some lucky guy! Really nice Carole.
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/23/2016 3:02:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. It wasn't real....
Date: 9/21/2016 5:16:00 PM
Very romantic Carole
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Carole Duet
Date: 10/4/2016 6:12:00 PM
Hi Tim! Yes, I'm a romantic at heart. Thanks for your comment. Carole

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