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A gentleman came calling for Betty. The house Madam said wait on the settee. Betty came running down. Tried to change the man's frown. But she had been so busy already. This is for the Bawdy limy contest, though not very bawdy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/23/2014 5:31:00 PM
Thank you for calling my visits a treat...Linda
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Date: 7/9/2014 8:57:00 PM
aww, she tired! lol.. congrats on a great win, Robert.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Robert Johnson
Date: 7/10/2014 9:17:00 AM
Your comment reminds me of Madeline Kahn's song she sang on the movie, Blazing Saddles. Thanks. Gave me a chuckle. :)
Date: 7/8/2014 11:43:00 PM
Robert, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda
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Robert Johnson
Date: 7/9/2014 8:23:00 PM
Hello Linda, always a treat to hear from you. Now Go Write Something to comment on. :)
Date: 7/7/2014 4:05:00 PM
I remember this one and how much I liked it the first time. Congrats to you.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 7/9/2014 8:25:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you, I guess I get points for being too decent to be too bawdy huh? :)
Date: 7/7/2014 12:56:00 PM
Good job, it could be naughty ;-) i like it, grats on the win
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Robert Johnson
Date: 7/9/2014 8:28:00 PM
Thanks Casarah. Appreciate your kind regards. :)
Date: 7/7/2014 7:36:00 AM
That's great wit Robert, well penned! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/7/2014 6:18:00 AM
Nice light humor flows, robert. congrats on the win
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Date: 7/6/2014 4:52:00 PM
made me chuckle Robert congrats on the win. hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/6/2014 4:29:00 PM
Quite good, though smooth round the edges; diplomatic. congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 6/23/2014 3:28:00 PM
That is a busy house!!! And the joke at the end was clever!
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Date: 6/23/2014 3:28:00 PM
I think it is a bit bawdy, so it works!!
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