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Reading Her Thoughts

~ Messages come of a heart that is singing, reading her thoughts at the start of a day Taking each bit of the moments now bringing, happily held as I go on my way Waiting the sun in her eyes gently streaming, finding a trace as the dawn comes around Looking for dreams in the sunrise now gleaming, softly the echoes of morning are found Every day I know there is a reason, joyful encounters spring forth of her smile It matters not of the time or the season, I find my way in her poetic style So as I write out these words I’m exploring, sitting alone in a monitor’s glare All I can think of is one I’m adoring and in my wishes of love that I share ~

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Date: 3/19/2020 2:34:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem.Had to check my fellow soupers are doing well and are healthy during rhis terrible era of covid 19.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/19/2020 2:45:00 PM
Hi there Charmaine. I am doing well, happy you stopped by. Hoping you are staying safe and healthy. Thank you so much my sweet friend.
Date: 3/18/2020 9:52:00 PM
Nicely done Chris, I can usually find a favorite part in a poem, but this whole poem is the favorite part.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/19/2020 10:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Rob.
Date: 3/14/2020 12:07:00 AM
A beautiful Spring poem which you relate to love - so special and so exquisite, Beautiful rhyme and rhythm - love this poem Chris. Blessings. Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/19/2020 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer
Date: 3/8/2020 7:59:00 PM
sigh.... beautiful write Chris...love the rhythm and flow of this one... hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 3/19/2020 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Sandy
Date: 3/7/2020 8:36:00 AM
the sun in her eyes gently streaming! Always such awesome visuals!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/19/2020 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Kim
Date: 3/4/2020 5:58:00 PM
This flows so well, as you write musical poetry. Nice one Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/5/2020 12:49:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend for all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 3/3/2020 3:34:00 PM
chris - you are a true master of rhyme and rhythm, a rare combination that few can perfect. your poems flow so (seemingly) effortlessly...
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Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2020 3:49:00 PM
Thank you so very much Ilene. What a very nice thing to say to me.
Date: 3/3/2020 11:36:00 AM
A wonderful write for a wonderful person in your life - true and frank - 'All I can think of is one I'm adoring, and in my wishes of love that I share" Breathtaking. Blessigs. Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2020 11:57:00 AM
I am happy you enjoyed this one Jennifer. Thank you so much.
Date: 3/3/2020 7:34:00 AM
Lovely lines Chris! Your poems always make me smile; except when you go deep and dark, those are transportive too. xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2020 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. I am happy you enjoyed this.

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