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I like her, she likes me I kissed her, she kissed me I love her, she loves me I'm busy, she’s busy I'm yelling, she’s screaming I'm angry, she’s crying I'm trying, she’s trying I'm leaving, she’s leaving I'm lonely, she’s lonely I lost a love, she lost a friend I never saw her, and she never saw me again.

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Date: 9/28/2010 12:34:00 PM
Good write dude T.Y for the kind comment on Poets keep up the work :)
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Date: 9/28/2010 10:46:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jay. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:37:00 AM
Nice thoughts on passionate feelings for each other, Jay
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:29:00 AM
Interesting write my friend...
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