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Reaching For Your Hand

When light dances upon the cinder pile and I see the final flickers in your eye when I know my days are numbered and I don't even chance to question why I sit in humbled silence reaching for your hand Mellow memories take shape in a grateful mind promises fulfilled even when dark skies cried dwelling on a life disappearing all too soon paths I took and how I'll miss being by your side I sit in humbled silence reaching for your hand When the dove swoops down to give her last kiss before I turn and fly off into the promised land know that even in the last breaths I take I'll be forever reaching for your hand

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Date: 10/12/2016 9:37:00 PM
such a great writing-love it-
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Date: 10/4/2016 7:22:00 PM
Beautiful, the last line makes the poem!
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Date: 10/4/2016 8:57:00 AM
what a dazzling gem, tim... a lovely write..huggs
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:04:00 PM
very touching, tim...
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Date: 10/3/2016 7:03:00 PM
Extremely Romantic Tim..Very beautiful poem.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2016 7:26:00 PM
Thank you very much Charma
Date: 10/3/2016 5:08:00 PM
We gotta find you a woman! You're wasting all of your good stuff on strangers. Lol Very romantic and "sweet" for lack of a better word. Nice write, Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2016 7:26:00 PM
Lol...thanks DT
Date: 10/3/2016 1:43:00 PM
Beautiful and precious imagery ...Linda
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2016 7:25:00 PM
Thank you Linda

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