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~~RE Birth ~~ A Poem by Debbie_Philly THIS IS A VERY OLD POEM ABOUT 2 YEARS Maybe 3 YEARS OLD... REBIRTH The dance is over, air expelling from my lungs like exploding bubbles I' am drowning , slowly descending like a graceful butterfly who has lost it's wings A backward plunge into the murky depths , arms expanded in light freeform motions. I must accept this chapter in which I've just closed, set out to sea on a barge of reverence. My life is now movement in words. The twirling motion of the pen writing in the next move. Rhythmical steps can no longer tell my story. So I go gracefully, bow out to pick up a new style of interpretation. Extending a hand to clean white parchment that waits for me on the floor of this page. The spot light no longer on the dancer. It shines on a new truth now, fact that I freely embrace as I lay the dream to rest. Picking up a new dream , one of words of tales, and of stories meant to be heard. So drift down now sweet dancer in beautiful dark arabesque motions, into the endless abyss that was once clear visions. Sleep now as I awake to a new day filled with poetic beginnings. Dance now in a different pattern, the moves are changed but the world is the same. Art of the mind while the body welcomes rest Time filled with words yet to be said, spoken words yet to be heard, songs yet to be sung, friends yet to be embraced. Swimming back up to the top of the waters as a new hope is defined, the birth of a poet. By:Debbie Mills Kelly © 2012 Debbie_Philly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/4/2014 12:11:00 AM
An imaginative and colorful write. Just one item appears questionable: In your ninth line, "except" should be "accept" if you are agreeing to take the chapter. If you getting rid of the chapter, then "expel" or "expunge" (several other alternatives are available) would be suitable for that line.
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:40:00 PM
Thank you again Robert.. :) I will be correcting those typos I promise.. thank you again for reading !! :)
Date: 2/3/2014 5:42:00 PM
Beyound A Doubt You Are Amazing, Sweet Beautiful Debbie ~ I Am Pressed For Time Right Now But We Shall Favour This Magnificent Portrait Of Her Splendours That We May Return, To Swim About It's Rainbow's Currents ~ Love John
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/3/2014 11:08:00 PM
John you are amazing thank you very much... :)
Date: 2/3/2014 4:33:00 PM
Oh a very nice write Debbie, I was expecting another very deep right, though this poem is deep, not like your other ones. I love it, well expressed and powerful. very good write Debbie indeed! It was a pleause reading all those great poems! Great job keep it up! :) xoxo
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/3/2014 11:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris :) Means allot and Im so happy you liked it.. will be over your way soon :)
Date: 2/3/2014 10:56:00 AM
"Extending a hand to clean white parchment that waits for me on the floor of this page"—powerful imagery. And then this upbeat closing: "Swimming back up to the top of the waters as a new hope is defined, the birth of a poet"—Bravo, poet!
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/3/2014 11:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Dah.... Im really happy that you liked it... :) I will be over to read you as well !!
Date: 2/3/2014 8:13:00 AM
Very nice work Debbie Mills Kelly! Enjoyed this very much...:-) Robert
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Robert Rogers
Date: 2/5/2014 5:08:00 AM
What I have seen of your work so far DM-K, I have more than read, I've "ABSORBED"!!! I love your "Down-To-Earth-Passion"! Keep up the good writes!...:-) xoxoxo//Sinclair
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/3/2014 11:06:00 PM
I will be over to read you as well ;)
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/3/2014 11:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert ... it means allot that you read my work !! :)

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