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Re- Awakening

A lone candle light in the abyss of darkness 
Yet words are woven in creations of your smile, 
The sweetest words are those not said intense timeless 
When in your embrace one melts to your unique style. 

Your flame renewed kindle in sweet resurrection 
Emerald eyes that glow in lust of perfection, 
Can but dowse puritan thoughts with insurrection 
Rebellion is kindled in this new affection 

Fires of passion the candle lit the abyss 
To burn forever more in the flame of true love 
To melt in your arms with the promise of a kiss 
The iron hand now firmly in the velvet glove 

Love like this has never before been given birth 
My life my love this is your awakened loving worth 

Harry J Horsman & Mandy M Tams 2013

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  1. Date: 3/28/2014 10:08:00 AM
    still love this one xx

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 7:50:00 PM
    Flows with beautiful images. I admire your sonnet writing skills . SuZ

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 5:33:00 PM
    Very nice!

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:49:00 PM
    You write so well on the subject of love Harry, kept me well captivated, very nicely written, Blessings my friend, Carl

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 1:42:00 PM
    Nice use of the literary devices in this piece... "The iron hand now firmly in the velvet glove" very beautiful line,

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Harry, a very romantic poem, both you and Mandy did well and thanks for visiting my poetry, constance

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 3:49:00 PM
    Wow! You both did great. It is very beautiful and very well written. thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 12:31:00 AM
    This is very beautiful and impressive Harry. it takes a special man to write a romantic sonnet and you do it well my friend. Lovely!

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 8:09:00 PM
    I read this on Mandy's page. It's a striking read with magnificent lines. Well done

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 5:02:00 PM
    May I give each a seven? Otherwise justice will not be served! Beautiful beyond words created by two beautiful people beyond words!

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 10:44:00 AM
    Excellent collaboration my friend, both glittering stars of our lovely P.S. Thanks...., loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 9:44:00 AM
    Wow !!! Wonderful colaboration... Kudo's to you both. The blending of two great poets shines through !! Touched my heart...these words have. Going in my favs !!!

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 8:09:00 AM
    Good morning, Harry -A love like that deserves to be written about, i think this poem was very admirable Harry, every stanza was just a flow of feverish romance, enjoyed, ~LINDA

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 9:58:00 PM
    Like I said at Mandy' the love story...awesome...

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 7:01:00 PM
    Wow.........if this doesn't melt a heart, nothing will. Just beautiful !

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:58:00 PM
    A collaboration of the best quality! - Gorgeous!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:23:00 PM
    oh my, I just saw this over at MAndy's and for some reason did not realize it was a collab!! Great job you two did together. ME ENCANTA.

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:15:00 PM
    Very passionate work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:40:00 AM
    Super wonderful poem... congrats to both of you...Terry

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:36:00 AM
    Harry,this a wonderful collab with Mandy.I truly feel awekened after reading such a solid gem..and may i say: what an amazing woman you`ve co-written with:)