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Tonight I drink your favorite whiskey down, two fingers at a time. I can still remotely feel your animalistic need, the hunger pounding at you. Palpable and true. Lover, I wont be sad for your life tonight. You are as real as the smoke in my lungs, real and transparent and weightless now. I smile at the memory of your beautiful voice. And the bonnie little boy you never lost. Someday, far from my dreams and memories released from earthly restraint, we will return to our Scotland. And dance upon the widest shores.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/10/2013 1:29:00 PM
t stopped by and read this again. You are such a creative writer with so much to feed the reader. Very picturesque imagery.
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Gina Young
Date: 11/10/2013 1:47:00 PM
Thanx so much Karen...I appreciate every kind word!!! Hopefully I will have the time today to go back and read some more of your stuff, really enjoy the way you write :)
Date: 9/16/2013 8:42:00 PM
Hi Gina, This is a captivating write... creative and gentle flow in your verse :)
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Date: 6/5/2013 11:36:00 PM
- Gina, another very well written. - Thank you. - Competent - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Gina Young
Date: 6/6/2013 12:50:00 AM
Anne~ thank u, thank u.

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