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Rays of Penetration

With ease, our nature's Light, penetrates even the Darkest of places My entry into Raul's " Ascension " contest http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/poetry-soup-2.php

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Sheol Moribund

Date: 11/28/2009 9:43:00 AM

Hi James: I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed reading this poem, nicely done. Peace: Sheol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations James, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” haiku contest with this lovely haiku. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brandee Augustus

Date: 11/26/2009 11:25:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/26/2009 3:00:00 AM

Congratulations,,well desrved win..indeed--Charma

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/25/2009 7:13:00 PM

Excellent, as usual! Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Ascension" Contest

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/25/2009 6:29:00 PM

Excellent Haiku! Wishing you good luck in Raul's "Ascension" Contest! Peace and love, Audrey N.B. Thank you for the comments!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/25/2009 12:26:00 PM

congrats on the placement!

Date: 11/24/2009 3:03:00 PM

I really like the message of this poem the first time I read it and made me smile again. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing!! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/24/2009 12:18:00 PM

This was a wonderful depiction of Raul's photo! Great job, James, congratulations! ~ Love, Carrie

Elaine George

Date: 11/24/2009 4:02:00 AM

MAGNIFICENT HAIKU, JAMES. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN RAUL'S CONTEST. LOVE, LAINIE

Brian Strand

Date: 11/24/2009 3:42:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest James.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 3:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest James. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 9:49:00 PM

Well more congrats, James, on your winning poem in Raul's contest... sharing the same stage with u is such an honor for me... enjoy this win as your haiku is wonderful... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/23/2009 9:38:00 PM

James, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

James Peranteau

Date: 11/21/2009 7:00:00 PM

Even in the pits of ancient caves,...deep with in,...the light has dulled ancient paintings ! Great poem Mr. Fraser !!!! james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2009 7:47:00 AM

Lovely, uplifting poem. Nature does provide an ascension, taking us above "even the Darkest of places." Awesome write! Love you, Carolyn

Date: 11/20/2009 12:49:00 PM

So much truth in your words. Much for the reader to think about in just three lines. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for all the comments. You made my day! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/20/2009 8:59:00 AM

As only the heavens can provide! Well done, James. Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/20/2009 4:27:00 AM

Ah, James! Human nature and God's Light... excellent poem with dual meaning. May God's blessings of health, strength, insight and your enlightenment continually be shared with others, through your beautiful words. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/19/2009 11:49:00 PM

James, I think I have just run across the winner in the contest. Profound. Love, Joyce

Marty Owens

Date: 11/19/2009 11:12:00 PM

Love your beautiful Haiku too...Shoot I love all of them...lol...Good luck in the contest...Marty

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/19/2009 7:03:00 PM

Darn it, it think youll be a winner! smile...BG

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/19/2009 6:43:00 PM

very well done! James!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2009 5:27:00 PM

Super poem and much luck in Raul's contest... everyone seemed to want to enter this one and from the selections I've read .. Raul's got his hands full as they are all as terrific as your submission.. interesting how each poet sees the photo in a different pattern in their creative mind... thankxxx for sharing to night and for your kind and encouraging comments and input for my poetry... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2009 4:33:00 PM

Very excellent Haiku that is sure to be a winner. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara