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Raw Wounds

The wound is still raw, but healing fast There is no way of forgeting the past Forgiveness is given but cracks are there What once glowed is now a blinding glare It's not just love, it's war and life Choices leading to pain and strife Sometimes, rarely we can get it right But often its the same, night after night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/3/2010 6:29:00 AM
I see a similar thread running through your poems -- and I love it! Will continue to watch out for your great works :) -Grace
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Date: 6/3/2010 8:52:00 AM
Wow...all of your poems are so right on! Great stuff. -Jodie
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