Raw Energy

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Pre valentine's gift from me to me

From Thee to me...

Endless gratitude.

No more cigarettes No more rock white hemlock No more sugar blues No more bitter regret No more lame excuses. Fourteen years have passed Fire was purifier From smoke's trap I rise First, soft rain fell with calm Father, forgive! I prayed. Water and fire- With those came fresh clean air Who heard and saved me? Women and men agree We're living energy. *

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Diane Christian

Date: 7/14/2015 11:10:00 AM

lovely poem, thank you for your kind feed back on my poem take flight, I do feel read to fly, although I used to have serious issues with heights, but im going to go for it being more than a conqueror through Jesus and faith.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 7/18/2015 7:15:00 PM

Thank you, and prepare to soar, faithfully.

David Meade

Date: 7/14/2015 9:05:00 AM

The purifying of the mind and body is freeing -- energy springs forth, a deep peace sinks deeps, a smile spreads across my face. N,F,W . . . I can think of so many more words to go with these letter, but you have captured the essence of life ! 7