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Stripped of pride Uncensored Long car ride Not a word Instant reaction Sugar free Painful contraction Every three Sky high credit Not a dime No time to edit Too far behind Prayer group Honest tears Truthful soup For all your peers Garden to table No additives Horse and stable Humbly lives Straight from utter To your lips Country crock butter God given hips Evil cancer Body, a shell Jesus the answer Remains smell Spirit gone Lovers behind Moving on Can't rewind Red handed Un tampered Pre sanded Nothing pampered Being frank Nothing un breakable Titanic sank God was capable Thoughts in head Before tongue Post said How it stung Anything real No alterations How you deal With situations

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Date: 7/26/2018 10:16:00 PM
Wow, xomo & mo hugs
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Date: 8/3/2015 1:48:00 PM
A raw rap like poem that flows with a carefree beat that elicits further thought. Emile.
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Date: 8/3/2015 10:11:00 AM
I felt your raw images and many will relate to your poem. ~~Darlene
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Date: 8/2/2015 10:17:00 PM
Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed it.
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