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Raw

Struck with this bleeding heart drips dropping straining the pores of so many open sores. Needles pricked in one more. I am struck raw wretched, stabbed and torn. Old bleeding sores left dripping by the door. We won't leave this way but you already have many times before.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2012 11:55:00 PM
Big congratulations, Gisele on your poem being featured this week. It's heart-wrenching...it's sad and it's awesome! Best Wishes and God bless. Peace and Love, Andrew.
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Date: 1/27/2012 10:59:00 AM
I really like the ryhming and your poem drew me in nice job
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Date: 1/27/2012 5:06:00 AM
This piece is awesome! i love the line "old bleeding sores left ...dripping by the door"...
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Date: 1/24/2012 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Gisele. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2011 10:07:00 AM
Wow! Powerful!!
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