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what do you do when your world is falling down when you have nothing to do and no purpose for anything and smile only to hide your feelings 2 steps forward 3 steps back washing your feelings away in a long endless bath no i dont do anything bad except in my thoughts but im a good person except my feelings are raw i can take all the pain but only for so long yes im a good person still my feelings remain raw ~Brittany Amsden~

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Date: 11/26/2010 10:06:00 AM
deep write Brittany,, enjoy your black friday lol,, this is a hectic day for shoppers and workers,, enjoy your weekend..p.d.
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Date: 11/24/2010 10:23:00 PM
good poem...happy thanksgiving
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