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Ravished By Poetic Fantasy

I fall asleep to lullaby of words My soul released from care and earthy woe I fly on wings of cherubs in the night I taste enchantment in an overflow The words you wrote caress in dreamy form They lead me to the land of beauty sweet Intoxicate me as full bodied wine Then place before my lips delicious treat I wine and dine on words to satisfy The longing in my heart for ecstasy Each word, each thought a lover in the night I’m ravished by poetic fantasy With morning light I wake to what is real With fortitude and strength to love and feel Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Date: 10/16/2013 3:50:00 PM
from the beginning it blossomed out beautiful
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Date: 10/15/2013 11:09:00 AM
this poem i've just read leads me to an opinion, that the poet that wrote this, is not only super intelligent, but a warm loving realistic person....well that's what i think anyway....
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 11:11:00 AM
:) You are a dear, Harry....Pure and simple! Hugs
Date: 10/15/2013 9:07:00 AM
Many times I have been transported by your words. This is another wondrously expressed piece.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 9:38:00 AM
Awwww.......thank you, Richard. I would have loved to have seen the word OFTEN instead of many times.... ;) I'll settle for many times....That's good as well. Thanks!
Date: 10/15/2013 5:44:00 AM
....releasing, caressing, enchanting, satisfying, ravishing.....the very words you use to describe poetry best describe this particular poem. This is a well written poem Eileen. You've enchanted me..JM
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 9:39:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph. You are very kind indeed. I'm glad you enjoyed this write, and thanks for using those very adjectives of mine to describe it. :) Will visit you soon!
Date: 10/14/2013 8:16:00 PM
a well written passionate write. Good job
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 9:42:00 AM
Thanks, Justice. Your words always have an honest ring to them. I like it.
Date: 10/14/2013 7:20:00 PM
Dearest Eileen... I'm pretty sure you're fast asleep in dreamland right now. Just an observation, you and I seem to FEEL the love and passion more deeply than most. Wouldn't want it any other way... happy Tuesday! Big loving hugs, Kenny xoxox
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 9:44:00 AM
:) I was when I read this...In bed...read it on my mobile! We do, don't we, Kenny? Sometimes I wish I had a heart of stone, but most times....yes, it is a blessing. Thanks for the hugs...RIGHT BACK AT YA!
Date: 10/14/2013 7:05:00 PM
Are you saying poetry isn't real lol, I know the feeling in this Eileen, I often go to sleep with words read singing in my mind. This is a super sonnet. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 9:46:00 AM
Mr Seal....You confuse me....Ummmmmm...what WAS i saying...tell me. Anyway, words...SINGING...in your heart? Really, Mr Seal? I am surprised!!!!! Super Sonnet is sweet. Thanks
Date: 10/14/2013 6:50:00 PM
great poem, eileen! yes, words do have that power...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 9:47:00 AM
Yes, they do! Sometimes more than they should! Hope all is well with you, dear....
Date: 10/14/2013 4:16:00 PM
Ps., Just Passing Back By, Sweet Beautiful Eileen. Saying, Thank You, Again And So Are You. Beyound The Verse Of Course, And Have A Very Beautiful Evening ˜
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 9:49:00 AM
Hope all is beautiful for you on this day, Johnny. Take care...thanks for stopping by again....
Date: 10/14/2013 3:06:00 PM
Caught up in the poetic rapture as stanza's wave...crashes into the walls of our hearts, knocking them down into yesterday's symphony. Yup, I can relate to this...excellently done!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 9:50:00 AM
Drake....your posts...they should be compiled into a poem of some sort. What beautiful flow your words have...I'm touched.
Date: 10/14/2013 2:51:00 PM
Poetry can lead us to wonderful places..to wherever We want to fly..Beautiful isn t it.You are an amazing writer Eileen who explains so well what lies beneath the words we share .Absolutely fantastic
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 9:36:00 AM
Yes, words do have a powerful effect on me....Sometimes it is frightening the extent to which I am taken in by them...Thanks for your lovely visit, my friend. Yes, I do love taking pictures...Thans for the compliment. :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/14/2013 2:53:00 PM
Lovely avatar sweet friend..I love pics so much
Date: 10/14/2013 2:50:00 PM
† Eyes Have Yet Seen Nor Thoughts Imagined, The Majestic Beauty Which, Awaits * I Love Your Creative Poetic Brush, As Your Passion, Beautiful Eileen. Thank You, For Passing By With Your Kind Visit, Love, John
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 9:35:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Johnny....Very sweet and kind words. I'm touched.

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