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Ravaged Land

The red beating land covered in constant storms The ground ravaged and torn apart The inner thumps struggling to continue Trying to survive the constant category F5 The sun rarely shines upon this red land Dark black clouds in the air Ground flooded with tears from the sky Roots revealed and torn on the surface Yet somehow the land continues There's no scientific reason why To thump and beat steadily So the land can stay alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/15/2012 8:22:00 PM
William , this is so nicely written...I like it!!.. Diana
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