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Rattling Away

She came in. She had my undivided attention. When she looked I turned away. So I sat there, with the pot boiling and lid just rattling away.

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Date: 2/20/2013 9:51:00 PM
Oooh. Tense. I really like this. Awesomely expressed!Always,Laura
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