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Rats Go Round

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Rats Go Round

(Refrain?) Rats in a cage and around we go Round and round we go Keep your tail up Keep your head down Which ways up And around we go Three too many on the wheel Too too long between meals One step ahead of the frail Some will eat their young Some chew their tail And some be carefully hung Clear my eyes of what I know Draw the truth in pleasing rows From every cage there’s one Who more than the rest Lacks standard deviation And his Kung Fu is best Life accelerates as the cliffs heat And for all the lemmings in bare feet Truth may be just too close to call What unravels one may unravel all Being certain I'm no kind of bird I'm drawn to the back of the herd

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:05:00 AM
    Congrats on your fine win. AO

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 9:15:00 PM
    Congratulations!! a very xool pub song poem... it was a joy coming back here to read all of Cyndi's expression of raising the roof winning poem... hugs and more hugs.. :-) ~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Blind, the poem sounds like fun. Congratulations with your pub song. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 2:03:00 AM
    A toast to thee for a great victory. Rick

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 4:20:00 AM
    Well done. Welcome to the Soup. Namste. Rick