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Rare Snowfall

The snowfalls of my childhood are but memories today, In mild winters where I live now, fifteen hundred miles away. Today I wakened to a sight that took me back in time, Bright snow covering the ground, surprised trees wreathed with rime. The roads are ice arenas, which few drivers can traverse. Cars lie abandoned by the side, or in the ditch, or worse. The schools are closed and children are sliding down the hills, Some partaking for the first time in a snowy day of thrills. I wish that I could conjure up a horse and big red sleigh That I could take out for a drive on such a wintry day. I’d bundle up my grandchildren in my big sled for a ride To enjoy the startling beauty of a wintry countryside. Written for Francine’s contest “ A Winter Couplet” Theme chosen. “First Snowfall”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/30/2011 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "A Winter Couplet" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2011 11:56:00 PM
congrats on your 6th place win Joyce with this lovely snowfall theme
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Date: 11/10/2011 7:44:00 PM
hey, did this really happen? I mean, was there a recent snowfall in WA? My dad never writes me anymore to tell me what is happening in OLympia! This is precious!
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Date: 11/10/2011 7:09:00 AM
I enjoyed this. I like the long lines and the way they maintain their integrity. And the rhyming feels musical. Thanks.
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Date: 11/9/2011 8:21:00 PM
the subject of your poetry begs to be seen through the eyes of children and all the excitement that entails for us ....great job of it Joyce
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Date: 11/9/2011 6:32:00 PM
Pleasant to read and richly evocative, with a wistful yet homey feel. Good work.
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