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Rapunzel's Double Life

RAPUNZELS' DOUBLE LIFE - ONCE UPON A TIME Not so long ago A housewife named Rapunzel Lived in a modest bungalow A white picket fence contained it Flowers filled beautiful garden beds A swinging seat Rapunzel would sit Golden ringlets tied upon her head Daily she'd greet the postman And wave as the buses passed by She's sit and dream of a life beyond Questioning herself as to why? Why is it I don't have glamour Not even glitz or fame? Why is it my life seems dull With everyday just the same? Wanting to feel some excitement A reason to dress up real nice Rapunzel took to the city lights And soon was living a double life Rapunzel became known as a socialite Golden ringlets hung down low Mixing with all the rich and famous Glitz and glamour was all the go But then on one fateful day Rapunzels' hubby caught her out Her photo was in the social pages He demanded "What's this all about?" Rapunzel she was speachless Thinking of what to say "Oh Arthur darling that's not me That's my sister Madeline May" "Madeline May is in town for a month I'm sure I mentioned it to you She'll be busy mixing with the wealthy Getting to know who's who" Arthur replied "I must of forgot" And with that Rapunzel sighed She'd have to be much more careful Arthur couldn't find out she'd lied This double life Rapunzel lived It filled her with such delight Life had a sense of pure excitement Being just a housewife didn't seem right For years Rapunzel continued Socialising with only the best Presuming Arthur had no clue She had no reason to confess After a long and eventful day Rapunzel discovered Arthur had gone Finding a note it simply said 'You've lived a double life too long!' 04/02/2016

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Date: 2/6/2016 6:20:00 PM
Thank you everyone for such lovely comments! And Thank you Laura Loo for the placement in your competition. It's all very encouraging.
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:25:00 PM
Susan, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:58:00 AM
Susan, congrats on your placement and thank you for being apart of my contest *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:20:00 AM
lovely storytelling Susan congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:34:00 PM
Susan,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:23:00 PM
Susan, I will continue to enjoy and support your poems if you continue with this site. You are going to like it here. I'm ready to read more of your poems. I don't post much. However, I have two new poems. I will click on your name, and check if you have another poem. HUGS. LINDA
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:12:00 PM
by the way, this is awesome, good luck in the contest. LINDA
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:11:00 PM
Hi Susan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Susan Ellis
Date: 2/4/2016 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, I hope you will continue to enjoy my poems in the near future.
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Susan Ellis
Date: 2/4/2016 7:18:00 PM
Thank you, I hope you will continue to enjoy my poems in the near future.

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