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Rapunzel

Rapunzel, Rapunzel, please let down your hair you're way up here and I'm way down there If only the miles could be spanned like a tower I'd start climbing at once and be there in an hour I'm not much of a painter, or swimmer or plumber so maybe it's best if I wait until summer In truth, I'm not sure that I'd be up to your measure, your standards are high and you're deserving of treasure So, I hope that you'll find a much worthier match than this humble poet; as I'm not much of a catch

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Date: 11/14/2014 12:04:00 AM
Very nice piece David! Quite enjoy it. Love and light! XxxD
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David Brown
Date: 11/15/2014 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Dorian, appreciate the kind words
Date: 11/13/2014 7:38:00 AM
I enjoyed this piece David. I like what you did with it. Warm Regards "B"
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David Brown
Date: 11/13/2014 11:51:00 PM
Thank you "B", much appreciated. Look forward to reading your work
Date: 11/12/2014 7:48:00 PM
David, enjoyed your write, but I bet you are a catch for someone out there. :) eve
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David Brown
Date: 11/13/2014 11:50:00 PM
Why thank you, Eve! That is very kind :)

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