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Raptureless

There once was a man most pious Who felt his predictions had no bias Of rapture he spouted While the world simply doubted He simply ensnared the more gullible of us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/24/2011 5:58:00 AM
Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Renee. Love, Carol
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Renee Kelly
Date: 5/24/2011 6:57:00 AM
Carol - thanks for stopping by and reading :) I've definitely decided limericks are easier for me to write. And the Camping fiasco has me thinking of the kids who are affected by all this.
Date: 5/23/2011 3:27:00 PM
Very enjoyable and humorous with wit, renee, I also posted two limericks on the same theme today.
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Renee Kelly
Date: 5/23/2011 3:30:00 PM
Thank you! I really do like writing limericks. This one wasn't so easy as there aren't a lot of words that rhyme with pious and bias :)

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